The Reading Room - The Monumental Affair by S.M. Mason

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

This is a nice, long story with drama and angst, some hurt and comfort, ladies in distress, agents in distress... Shall I go on?  It is, as the title suggests, monumental.  It is also, amazingly, the first MFU fiction from this writer.  I don't know what else she's done or if she might be here on LJ, but her first story is a whopper of a tale.
The Monumental Affair on file40.net

Comments

[akane42me.livejournal.com]

Well, I gave it a go, but I was not able to stick with it. It is indeed a whopper of a story. And I think it's awesome for a first time fanfic writer to write such a complex, long story. She had to have spent a ton of time, thought, and work to write it. But... The story has so many punctuation errors and run-on sentences, I had to put it down. I hope she's continued to write, and has found a beta reviewer to help with those pesky punctuation issues. To have the wherewithal to produce such an impressively 'monumental' story, she's got a lot going, and I applaud her for that.