WRITER'S CHOICE- "La Bonita Santa Rosita" ~ a drabble story by mrua7

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I was never able to post this fic to Section VII as I was having trouble with the site and finally just gave up trying.

Summary: This story involves lots of sun and sand but sadly no beach as Napoleon and Illya find themselves stranded in the Chihuahuan desert.

This is a favorite of mine as it was the first drabble story that I ever tried to write, and I was pleased with the end result. I was amazed at how much imagery, drama, angst and dialogue could fit into so few words and still tell a cohesive story.

Comments are most welcome and appreciated! (Btw it's posted under Mlaw)

                                            https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7734504/1/La-Bonita-Santa-Rosita

                                                         

Comments

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

There are so few words in this piece and yet it tells so much. Neat!

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

That's what I was trying to tell you about a drabble. Though this is an exception because it tells a full story with only 100 word chapters. Drabbles really help you be more concise and descriptive in your language because you have such a limited space in which to tell your tale. Thanks for taking a look at the story and for commenting.