Never A Good Bye - A Little Drabble Do Ya

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

The action was fierce, and when it was finally over Napoleon was found in the far corner of the old warehouse, slumped over and barely breathing.

“What happened Mr. Kuryakin?  This was intended as a simple exchange of information.”  Mr. Waverly disapproved of his men being near death, not that he was sentimental.

“I cannot explain it, sir.  We were handing off to Comrade... to Mr. Petrovsky, when suddenly we were being attacked from all sides.  Mr. Solo attempted to shield Yuri but..”

“But they were both shot.  KGB?”  Illya nodded ever so slightly.

“I am sorry Mr. Kuryakin.”

“Spacibo.”

Comments

[avery11.livejournal.com]

You suggest a lot in very few words. I like your characterization of Waverly, who cares, but is not in any way sentimental. The general who knows he must send his troops into great danger, and has made peace with that necessity.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm glad to hear back on how well a few words meet their intentions; happy that you think they did.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

As mentioned above,you say so much in such a short space. Do you have any intention of creating a longer piece from it?

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Do you have any intention of creating a longer piece from it?

That's the thing about a drabble, there's always possibilities out in the future. Thank you, I appreciate the comment, and the suggestion.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

So much in so few words, action, angst and the potential for more...hope that's the case?

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

"Mr. Waverly disapproved of his men being near death, not that he was sentimental." That sure says a mouth full! I just love this piece.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you, that seems to be the line of the day ;) We all know how Mr. Waverly feels about sentimentality.

[pactnmmt.livejournal.com]

As others have said before, so much with so few words. Well done, Glenna. I, too, hope you continue the story in more depth.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It never occurred to me when writing this that there might be more to it, but now you've all got me wondering about it. I will get back to you ;)