Writer's Choice: Little Girl Lost Affair

[kanders07.livejournal.com]

I've wanted to post something here for the longest time but it took a while to get my stories into an archive.

This was my very first story, so I'm kind of proud of it. The story was meant to be another look at Illya. Lots of writers portray him as cold and and non feeling. That wasn't the Illya I saw in the series.

So, without further ado...
http://www.mfuarchive.net/archive/5/thelittle.html

Comments

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

An absolutely wonderful story that left me wanting more. Thanks so much for adding it to the Writer's Choice. And Welcome to Section VII!

[kanders07.livejournal.com]

Thank you. There's more, just be patient.

Thanks for the welcome. I lurk everywhere, just haven't had the time this summer to be online much beyond the short stories and newsletter.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

You are busy that's for sure, but please come back anytime. Hopefully you can jump into one of our writing challenges now and then? "D

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

Such a wonderful and sad story but there needs to be more. I want to know how things are between brother and sister as they don't really know each other. How can she live with him when he leads such a dangerous life? How does he tell her about his life with UNCLE and what about her education? Please write another story about them.

[kanders07.livejournal.com]

There is another, I just haven't gotten it archived yet. A job for my Sunday afternoon.

Thanks so much for reading.

[glennagirl.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad to see this here, it's a very welcome addition to Writer's Choice. A lovely and touching portrayal. Illya isn't cold hearted, he just has a job to do.

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

This is a beautiful and touching story. I can imagine the excitement they'll both have as Illya shows Anya her new life.