"We're all mad here" for the Great Episode Challenge

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Great Episode Challenge

Episode: "The Mad, Mad Tea Party Affair"

Title: 'We're all mad here'

Author: mrua7

Word Count: ~ approximately 1264

Prompt 2: Kay Lorrison is about to marry Walter, in her words a “teddy bear” and “a very nice, dull, safe guy.” At her disappearance, her teddy bear turns into a “wild grizzly.” The questions…What happens to Kay and Walter? What explanation does she give him? Does she still marry him? Does she go back to work at the store or does she try for the job in the “chrome and gunmetal madhouse” that she asked about?

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Comments

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Excellent plot twist, and a good exciting chase with it. Though I have the strange idea you're not Kay's greatest fan, you've given her some good lines, such as “Easy for you to say,”. The question about Napoleon being married is good, too; and shows a grasp of essentials which might help UNCLE in future.

(Excuse me, but I'm afraid you have dulpicated the post in AO3.)

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank for that great review. Yeah, Kay's voice to me is like nails on a chalkboard.

Duplicate post on AO3...that's weird. could have sworn I had just the one draft when I posted it this morning. Will check.

Duplicate on AO3

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

I just looked at all my stories and there's only one story called "We're all mad here." unless there's some sort of glitch on AO3. I not seeing a duplicate

Never mind I see what you're saying thanks. yikes, wonder how that happened? All fixed. Thanks.

Re: Duplicate on AO3

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

Always up to something, these little computers. Excuse my putting it confusingly.

Re: Duplicate on AO3

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

No worries, it didn't take me that long to figure out what you meant. loll :D

[lindafishes8.livejournal.com]

Absolutely love your version. It tidies things up nicely. I think Kay would have dumped Walter anyway. Your ending is a much more satisfying finish to that Affair.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Wow thank you very much! I wasn't quite sure if some of it made sense but I guess it did, so thanks for the affirmation!

[jantojones.livejournal.com]

Brilliant! I thought your twist was very clever, and you tied it up perfectly.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Another wow! Thank you. This was one of those stories that I wasn't quite sure about, but the positive reactions are making me feel much better about it. :D

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

Ooo, very clever. I hadn't imagined Walter as a bad guy, but it fits perfectly with his wild grizzly reaction. Thanks for the entry.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. Are you going to be able to do a story too? (Yes I know, life interferes with art, doesn't it?)

Still I think congratulations are in order for your first Great Episode Challenge! You're off to a great start.

[ssclassof56.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :) I hope to post one, but it will be late. I'm eking out a sentence or two at a time when I can.

[mrua7.livejournal.com]

You know my motto, "better late than never." Bet you're looking forward to the end of May. :D